Poem for english

well my mom said it was really good so i decided to see what you think

BREATH- BY ANDI MCBRIDE

My nerves, out of control, I need to just breathe

I knew it was going to be a good one, for this was my element

I’m in position, I feel every ones eyes, I feel the adrenaline

I move but two feet, people begin to cheer

Not even finished yet, I felt as if I had done what I wanted to accomplish

I turn to see the faces of others, expressions of joy

My heart inside me had leaped for joy

Now I knew I could breathe

I had not officially done what I came to accomplish

I could feel everything stirring around me, the elements

For silent was my fears, I could not hear one cheer

Anger filled my veins, so did the poison of adrenaline

My body ached, from all the adrenaline

But my heart decided I would not deprive myself of joy

I no longer was here for just the cheers

I could feel the air begin to heavy and start to breathe

It felt as if I was out of my own element, and into a new element

No stopping now, it now was a must to accomplish

The word was engraved into my mind and heart “accomplish”

It was not just in my veins but my heart, and mind, the poison adrenaline

My mindset was new, which caused a calming of the elements

I no longer wanted fame but just the feeling of joy

Nerves again, I told myself to “just breathe”

I walked towards position; out of control were the cheers

Focuse, focuse, they fade away I cannot hear the cheers

In my mind I repeat, “I will do this, I will accomplish”

I go numb everything stops, I cannot feel myself breathe

It pulses through my veins the pain, the adrenaline

I see the people’s faces, wanting to express joy

Everything has stopped even the elements

This was my place this was my territory, my element

Everything exceeds all excitement; all I can hear is cheers

I was beaming, my face expressed pure joy

I had done it, I had done what I needed to accomplish

Everything ceased; the poison had left my veins, the adrenaline

Finally I could say I did it, Finally I could just breathe